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Ahhh, Evening

Ahhh, evening
and a breeze in my face
the fan is noisy

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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

June 2, 2012 at 12:17 AM

Tremendous Haiku!!! Soup mail!!!

Debbie Guzzi

March 26, 2012 at 3:51 PM

Now here I would say [and i do this often] you have simply discribed what you saw..there is no particular beauty or ah HA! about this moment, no real reason for you to write about it at all..I can get here now to get to the ah HA! moment and do it in correct form LOL

Charles Henderson

March 26, 2012 at 4:36 PM

without disagreeing with your statement, I think I can say that my first view was me having breeze in my face and the turn is that the breeze is from a fan. Not the wind blowing. Kind of dull maybe but made sense to me at the time.