Notes About The Poem

[This poem was first published as "Untitled" in Author/Poet and, later, in Merlin's Magic. It was included in my first poetry chapbook, "The Lady in the Pink Hat," Candor Press, 1969.]

Ahead There Looms a Mountain

Ahead there looms a mountain
We see it in the sun
A symbol of hope and beauty
A laurel proudly won,
A tall and stately statue
To lift the soul's despair
Clothed in strength and valor
Bathed in crispy air.
A monument to loftiness
From Nature's gifted hands
The length of darkened valley
Majestic mountain spans.
We choose the path we follow
Our soul will stand the test
Did we walk the valley
Or the mountain crest?

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Kendrick Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Very good flow, rhythm and rhyme. It is very descriptive and expressive winning work. Congrats. Sara
Hankins Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Sara. I was a very young poet when I wrote that.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Accolades to this tribute to a mountain "A symbol of hope and beauty A laurel proudly won, A tall and stately statue" Wow!
Hankins Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. The words just flowed. I was so young, I'm not entirely sure I understood what I was writing!
Alex Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Beautiful!
Hankins Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Thanks so much, Christuraj, for your accolade.
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