Aha Moment

married forty years space for one more name on stone… lawnchair dents in grass -03 Aug 2014-

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 12:56:00 PM

aww sweet and sad. well done david, grats on ur win

Paul Callus

Date: 8/8/2014 2:36:00 PM

Such a lovely haiku, but somewhat sad, too. Congrats on your fine win, David. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:15:00 PM

huge congrats, daviv.. well done!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:38:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:00:00 AM

Congratulations on the high win, david.

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/8/2014 12:24:00 AM

Love this david-congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:59:00 PM

full of emotion this one is. Congrats. It's a lot like real haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2014 6:21:00 AM

I can feel the expectation, waiting, patience, longing and grief in this sport one..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2014 4:28:00 PM

Oh how sad a haiku. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx