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aha moment

married forty years
space for one more name on stone…
lawnchair dents in grass

-03 Aug 2014-

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Date: 8/9/2014 12:56:00 PM
aww sweet and sad. well done david, grats on ur win
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:36:00 PM
Such a lovely haiku, but somewhat sad, too. Congrats on your fine win, David. // paul
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:15:00 PM
huge congrats, daviv.. well done!.. huggs
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the high win, david.
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:24:00 AM
Love this david-congratulations
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:59:00 PM
full of emotion this one is. Congrats. It's a lot like real haiku
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Date: 8/5/2014 6:21:00 AM
I can feel the expectation, waiting, patience, longing and grief in this sport one..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:28:00 PM
Oh how sad a haiku. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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