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Aha Moment

married forty years
space for one more name on stone…
lawnchair dents in grass

-03 Aug 2014-

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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August 9, 2014 at 12:56 PM

aww sweet and sad. well done david, grats on ur win

August 8, 2014 at 2:36 PM

Such a lovely haiku, but somewhat sad, too. Congrats on your fine win, David. // paul

August 8, 2014 at 2:15 PM

huge congrats, daviv.. well done!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:38 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

August 8, 2014 at 1:00 AM

Congratulations on the high win, david.

Craig Glenister

August 8, 2014 at 12:24 AM

Love this david-congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2014 at 11:59 PM

full of emotion this one is. Congrats. It's a lot like real haiku

August 5, 2014 at 6:21 AM

I can feel the expectation, waiting, patience, longing and grief in this sport one..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara

August 3, 2014 at 4:28 PM

Oh how sad a haiku. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

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