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Ah, Youth

Younger people slake their thirst - No reason to endure it - With water or another drink As quick as they procure it. But older folk will agonize Although they may secure it, 'Cause if they drink enough to quench, Their bladders just can't store it. Though young and old alike may share A quenching-thirst ability, It's only older ones who care 'Bout where's the next facility.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/4/2015 11:00:00 PM
Nice poem, excuse me, I have to go. :)
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Date: 5/31/2015 9:17:00 PM
Excellent enjambment and splendid structure in the use of 7 and 8 syllable lines! I love endure/procure/secure and the nifty rhyming of ability/facility. A 7... as are all your delightful poems!! Keith
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Date: 5/30/2015 6:24:00 PM
Well said Ilene... youth plan ahead for a bus stop, train station, night club... not us oldies - Lindsay
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Date: 5/30/2015 5:09:00 PM
haha, Ilene, I have cared about the next facility since i was a CHILD. I think i have the world's smallest bladder!!!
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Date: 5/30/2015 2:44:00 PM
oh so true Ilene - your observation is sadly true:-( hugs Jan xx 7 ss
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