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Ah huh

It echoes in me For her voice topples me all Am I in trouble - for you mamibeah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/15/2009 12:40:00 PM
Filled with personality, it seems like it just flashed out of you in a crucial moment; love it! thanks for sharing =D
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Date: 8/2/2009 3:43:00 AM
Very nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/22/2009 8:43:00 PM
Sounds alot like love my friend, another great piece.
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Date: 7/19/2009 6:59:00 AM
YES!!! (smiling) Take Care Eduardo. She's got your love. Ah huh DAS-J Soupmail
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Date: 7/19/2009 6:05:00 AM
ow no you re in trouble little one-you made me smile--great write as ALWAYS--CHARMA
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Date: 7/18/2009 10:58:00 PM
your poetry inspires your heart! Eduardo! jim
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