Ah Huh

It echoes in me 
For her voice topples me all
Am I in trouble



















































- for you mamibeah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Filled with personality, it seems like it just flashed out of you in a crucial moment; love it! thanks for sharing =D
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 3:43 AM
Very nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Bird Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 8:43 PM
Sounds alot like love my friend, another great piece.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 6:59 AM
YES!!! (smiling) Take Care Eduardo. She's got your love. Ah huh DAS-J Soupmail
Chircop Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 6:05 AM
ow no you re in trouble little one-you made me smile--great write as ALWAYS--CHARMA
Goff Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 10:58 PM
your poetry inspires your heart! Eduardo! jim
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