Ah, Bite Me

Get out of bed
and just get it in gear.
Don’t give me excuses;
I don’t want to hear.

Now follow my rules,
you’re doing it wrong!
You wrote me a poem
but I asked for a song.

I think you are deaf,
cause you can’t be that dumb.
You say “treat me better”,
so prove you’re not scum!

You’re lucky to have me,
nobody else would
put up with your bull-crap,
I treat you so good.

He kept on and kept on
he thought she would break
but as he would learn
he’d gave more than she’d take.

Next night when he came home,
she’d set herself free.
On the mirror in lipstick
she'd scrawled, “Ah, Bite Me!!”

05/31/15
Submission for Bite Me!!
Hosted by John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Nice win.... LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Preston! Great write!
Roper Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations on the win a 7 Hugs Eve
Sergi Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Hi Preston: Beautiful poem and beautiful payback in the end.
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:33 PM
nice win
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Preston:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:19 PM
This is an interesting and fun read with a happy ending. I kinda felt like cheering when I read the last two lines. Well done and thanks for playing the contest game.
Grahamburglar Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Thank you John for hosting, and of course, for the high marks. That was a fun theme.
A  Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 10:58 PM
LOL, She's sounds a bit like me... :) good luck
Ward Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 12:43 AM
Great fun and imaginative... Good luck in the contest, Preston.
Allison Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 5:56 PM
love the sting in the tail at the end Preston - great pen - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs JAN XX
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