Agony Aunt Competition Entry

Dear depressed girlfriend you say he’s acting strange
And I understand you life feels so rearranged 
 However this boy really is not a man
He had his sister finish the dastardly plan
So my loving advice to you my dear
Is to hold your head high and walk away with no fear
 
For this three-month fling with a boy 
 From what you say made you feel like a toy
I know right now the pain is torture and you’re in agony 
But one day you will find a man to go down on one knee
A man that wont play games with your tender heart
But will treat you right from the very start

So my advice to you my lovely girl 
Is to get dressed up and give a swirl 
You have a gorgeous soul this is true
So time to pick yourself up and start a new
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Brewer Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Great poem with good advice. xx fab
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 12:25 PM
wow Quin fabulous write! Do check out my page too. See you in chat Jan xxxxx
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 4:01 AM
Quinlan good advice and excellent writing....David
Carrillo Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 11:33 AM
I like the advice and I hope she takes it. I always say if somebody don't want to play with you - pick up your toys and leave. Good poem thanks for sharing... lucilla
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