Agnevee Does It Again

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Pertanacious: If you are pertanacious, it means that you hold firmly to your beliefs no

matter what, even if proof of the opposite direction is given. Stubborn.

Agnevee was particular and pertinacious.
People avoided her on the street.
She always had a cause, a candidate, a platform, a drive or a charity to talk up.

Agnevee’s pertinacity was well-known. She would not budge from any position.
It was laughable, silly, deemed crazy.
Her own relatives gave her the wrong time so she would be an hour late.

Agnevee’s neighbors cringed when they saw her come to her window.
They got in their cars and drove off when they saw her through her front door.
When she entered a store, utility company or post office, people scattered.

Conversations quickly dissipated, ceased, and were not resumed 
upon Agnevee’s arrival. She had one friend, Bella, and she asked her about it.
Bella was new in town, and had no idea what was happening.

But the longer Bella and Agnevee were friends, the easier it was for Bella
to see what the trouble is. If she said brown, Agnevee corrected her, and called it copper.
If she said something nice about a candidate, Agnevee handed her pamphlets disparaging her.

Her fervent opinions were so deeply rooted, that she soon was not welcome
in Bella’s home either.  So she wandered around, in her own nightmare, of her own making,
waiting for the next newcomer to move to town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/27/2019 6:02:00 PM
Poor woman. That would be awful.
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:42:00 PM
I like Agnevee, she's pe-per-pertanacious. Jesus, where does it come from?) By the way, Agnevee literally means "in anger" in Russian - va gnevi)
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Date: 6/27/2019 1:54:00 AM
Totally engrossing! …..still desire to read more about Agnevee :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/27/2019 10:43:00 AM
I should give Agnevee her own book then?
Date: 6/26/2019 9:47:00 PM
Hi Caren. You have a delightful way with words. I found myself wanting to read more. And thank you for so kindly commenting on my poems. Being the new kid on the block, I do appreciate it!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/27/2019 10:44:00 AM
You are so welcome. I try my best to get to all the "new kids on the block" because I was new to this site on Feb 15th, 2018. So you see, I still remember the thrill of every first comment and my excitement at getting "followers"!
Date: 6/26/2019 8:56:00 PM
Agnevee is an interesting choice of names, methinks. It must mean something I'm not aware of. Enlighten me, perhaps (?) ~ gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/27/2019 10:46:00 AM
I made it up, because my theory is - if I use a name like Rachel and it is your mother's name or a name like Tyler and you have a crazy cousin named Tyler you automatically think of them and incorporate them into the story. You will notice lots of made up names when I do not want any preconceived subliminal thoughts to sway your read one way or the other.
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