Written 5 June 2025 for Your Choice U Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand
Aging Hiku 26 s. a. n. d. s of time drip on s-t-e-m and l ~e~ a~ v~ e~ s wilting away~ w-i-s-d-o-m waltzing strong.
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