Aging Hiku 26

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Written 5 June 2025 for Your Choice U Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Aging Hiku 26 s. a. n. d. s of time drip on s-t-e-m and l ~e~ a~ v~ e~ s wilting away~ w-i-s-d-o-m waltzing strong.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2025 3:52:00 PM

VERY nice and congrats

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/8/2025 12:43:00 AM

Thanks for appreciating the write and your kind wishes .

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2025 12:48:00 PM

Very well crafted poem, my friend. Congratulations on your well-deserved contest win.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/8/2025 12:38:00 AM

Thanks for appreciating the write and your kind wishes.