Aging Got Worse

~ Doctor Save Me ~

              Help me aging got worse they say
                           sources of problems are solutions find one 
                                            my beauty is wrinkled
                                                         my heart stopped blinking
                                                                   don't shrink my hopes
                                                                              I`ll sink hurry think
                                                                                        & Save Me.
                                                                                   
                                                                                      Therese Bacha
                                                                                                24/4/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/4/2013 5:40:00 PM
I think that this is a unique and cool write! Age is just a number, I like what you said about inner beauty and staying in love, you are a wise lady. Hugs
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:47:00 PM
Hi Cecilia, i like your smile in your picture, and i love what you wrote. For me to love an unconditional love to whoever, gives life a meaning to live. Hope you are loved. I am sure you are. Good night. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 5/4/2013 5:40:00 PM
I think that this is a unique and cool write! Age is just a number, I like what you said about inner beauty and staying in love, you are a wise lady. Hugs
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Date: 5/4/2013 1:08:00 PM
Hi Terry, i find the best medicine is ones outlook on life, doctors can let u down sometimes, but a good attitude never will, keep your chin up my freind, oh and thanks for callin me a young man, ill be 60 in Sept, but i feel fourty, blessings ,Carl
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Date: 5/4/2013 1:23:00 PM
Well Carl, you are very young, my son will be 56 also in Sept. so you are a Virgo, very very deep and sincere. I am 76, and doctors are not my friends. I believe in the inner beauty and staying in love, replaces doctors. Have a nice day. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 5/3/2013 2:39:00 PM
Time keeps running away and I think as we grow older we want to stop the aging. Nicely written. love phyl
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Date: 5/4/2013 1:24:00 PM
Hi Phyl, thank you for passing by. Love Terry xoxo. Do you have the sun? Montreal is very warm.
Date: 4/30/2013 4:28:00 PM
Save me too from aging. Time goes faster every year and you wonder where that time went. Nicely done. Betty
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:50:00 PM
Hi Betty, yes time is so important nowadays, thank you so much for passing by. Love Terry
Date: 4/28/2013 2:01:00 PM
Aging like fine wine, I do believe that is so true, especially with red wine. As far as growing old, we can do it gracefully or go out kicking like hell. I think I'll go out making a lot of noise. Enjoyed your poem Terry. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 4/30/2013 1:47:00 PM
Hi Connie, i love red wine, so i do not mind my aging at all. Your cute and funny. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/27/2013 8:00:00 AM
Good morning Terry. I'll save you. Don't worry. Us women are supposed tio be like the WINE. we improve with age. Smile JESUS loves us......... Lucilla
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Date: 4/27/2013 8:11:00 AM
Hi Lucy, thank you so much, I love wine to. Have a great weekend. Love terry xoxo
Date: 4/26/2013 6:19:00 PM
Clever how you visually created the sinking feeling. Well done.
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Date: 4/27/2013 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Richard, nice seeing you. Terry xo
Date: 4/25/2013 3:21:00 PM
Cute one..Growing old is not for sissies for sure..I got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara
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Date: 4/27/2013 8:09:00 AM
Hi Sara, we age with maturity and acceptance. Congrats on all your winners Terry xo
Date: 4/25/2013 9:51:00 AM
- Even one very good poem Terry. . . they comes like pearls on a string - (is that a skilled doctor, send him over to me.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2013 12:27:00 AM
hey sweetie was this the surprise? I am sure glad to see you writing so much!! I really like this one. goodnight now. I am past my bedtime heehee
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Date: 4/25/2013 8:17:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thank you.....love Terry xoxo have a nice day.
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