Therese Bacha Poet Prose Poetry

Aging Got Worse

~ Doctor Save Me ~

              Help me aging got worse they say
                           sources of problems are solutions find one 
                                            my beauty is wrinkled
                                                         my heart stopped blinking
                                                                   don't shrink my hopes
                                                                              I`ll sink hurry think
                                                                                        & Save Me.
                                                                                   
                                                                                      Therese Bacha
                                                                                                24/4/2013

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Cecilia Macfarlane May 4, 2013 at 5:40 PM I think that this is a unique and cool write! Age is just a number, I like what you said about inner beauty and staying in love, you are a wise lady. Hugs

Cecilia Macfarlane May 4, 2013 at 5:40 PM I think that this is a unique and cool write! Age is just a number, I like what you said about inner beauty and staying in love, you are a wise lady. Hugs Therese Bacha May 4, 2013 at 8:47 PM Hi Cecilia, i like your smile in your picture, and i love what you wrote. For me to love an unconditional love to whoever, gives life a meaning to live. Hope you are loved. I am sure you are. Good night. Love Terry xoxo

Carl Fraser May 4, 2013 at 1:08 PM Hi Terry, i find the best medicine is ones outlook on life, doctors can let u down sometimes, but a good attitude never will, keep your chin up my freind, oh and thanks for callin me a young man, ill be 60 in Sept, but i feel fourty, blessings ,Carl Therese Bacha May 4, 2013 at 1:23 PM Well Carl, you are very young, my son will be 56 also in Sept. so you are a Virgo, very very deep and sincere. I am 76, and doctors are not my friends. I believe in the inner beauty and staying in love, replaces doctors. Have a nice day. Love Terry xoxo

Phyllis Babcock May 3, 2013 at 2:39 PM Time keeps running away and I think as we grow older we want to stop the aging. Nicely written. love phyl Therese Bacha May 4, 2013 at 1:24 PM Hi Phyl, thank you for passing by. Love Terry xoxo. Do you have the sun? Montreal is very warm.

Betty Bateson April 30, 2013 at 4:28 PM Save me too from aging. Time goes faster every year and you wonder where that time went. Nicely done. Betty Therese Bacha April 30, 2013 at 7:50 PM Hi Betty, yes time is so important nowadays, thank you so much for passing by. Love Terry

Connie Gildersleeve April 28, 2013 at 2:01 PM Aging like fine wine, I do believe that is so true, especially with red wine. As far as growing old, we can do it gracefully or go out kicking like hell. I think I'll go out making a lot of noise. Enjoyed your poem Terry. Warm Smiles, Connie Therese Bacha April 30, 2013 at 1:47 PM Hi Connie, i love red wine, so i do not mind my aging at all. Your cute and funny. Love Terry xoxo

Lucilla Carrillo April 27, 2013 at 8:00 AM Good morning Terry. I'll save you. Don't worry. Us women are supposed tio be like the WINE. we improve with age. Smile JESUS loves us......... Lucilla Therese Bacha April 27, 2013 at 8:11 AM Hi Lucy, thank you so much, I love wine to. Have a great weekend. Love terry xoxo

Richard Lamoureux April 26, 2013 at 6:19 PM Clever how you visually created the sinking feeling. Well done. Therese Bacha April 27, 2013 at 8:10 AM Thank you Richard, nice seeing you. Terry xo

Sara Kendrick April 25, 2013 at 3:21 PM Cute one..Growing old is not for sissies for sure..I got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara Therese Bacha April 27, 2013 at 8:09 AM Hi Sara, we age with maturity and acceptance. Congrats on all your winners Terry xo

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2013 at 9:51 AM - Even one very good poem Terry. . . they comes like pearls on a string - (is that a skilled doctor, send him over to me.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2013 at 12:27 AM hey sweetie was this the surprise? I am sure glad to see you writing so much!! I really like this one. goodnight now. I am past my bedtime heehee Therese Bacha April 25, 2013 at 8:17 AM Hi Andrea, thank you.....love Terry xoxo have a nice day.