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Aging

Innocent angel sent from God I am feeble and somewhat odd I play and eat, I cry and sleep As you pray God my soul to keep The older I get the more I learn The more I get to crash and burn The more I smile because of my friends And wish my teen life doesn’t end But now I’m weak as a child again My health becomes difficult to maintain And now I slowly lose my breath My last day; a touch from death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2013 11:34:00 AM
Very god poem on Aging.Enjoyed the read.
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
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Kash Poet
Date: 3/29/2013 11:36:00 AM
GOOD poem......

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