Aging

There's history written upon my face
Lines and curves do not erase
My eyes are circled, my lids now sag
I carry around a stomach bag

My fanny's tired and pulls my frame
It's not arthritis, sloth is to blame
My shoulders groove from straps too tight
But still, stuff hangs, both day and night

My toenails thicken, jog left and right
My eyeglasses strengthen to aid my sight
My nails sport acrylics shaped just so
They're already neat wherever I go

I'm amused each morning as I search the mirror
For neck supports that seem to wither
Somewhere or other I've lost some inches
One foot has widened, one shoe now pinches

The mystery of how I shall evolve
Gets me up each morning to try and solve
The meaning of aging, it’s such a bother
I look in the mirror and see my mother!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/10/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Denise. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:17:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Denise, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Denise. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2010 4:00:00 PM
i love this poem we all should be lucky to live so long to see the life roads in maps all over our body no matter how what
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Date: 9/5/2010 12:11:00 PM
Senior moments are golden...do it gracefully.
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:55:00 AM
excellent write! I can relate!
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