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Ageless Summery

Ageless Summery

a porch screen riddled
by fragmenting noon beacons
     ~~grandmas curtain hangs

chairs rock as handheld
fan waves midst squeaking floorboards
     ~~iced tea drinks glisten

2020 June 23

*3rd Place*

Summer Haiku's
~~Tania Kitchin

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Aditi Mishra Date: 7/1/2020 12:28:00 AM Your words weave a painting of summer in motion William. An emotionally intriguing haiku. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/1/2020 12:13:00 PM A wondrous commentary that sweetens my morning coffee, Aditi, blessings -- Aloha~@William

John Watt Date: 6/29/2020 3:09:00 PM Such authentic memories of summers gone by, William. The graphic made a nice addition; enjoyed your title, too. Congrats on your win in the summer haiku contest ~ John Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/29/2020 3:20:00 PM I am grateful for your insightful reflections, John, truly appreciative am I -- Aloha~@William

Funom Makama Date: 6/29/2020 3:02:00 PM A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/29/2020 3:09:00 PM My many thanks to you, Funom -- Aloha~@William

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/29/2020 12:14:00 PM Your poem dwells in loving memories and creates wonderful summer images uniquely you--well done, William. Congrats on your podium win. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/29/2020 1:12:00 PM Many thanks for your refreshing share, Vijay, most kind of you -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/29/2020 9:43:00 AM Aloha William! What a wonderful image you penned...congratulations on your top placement. Jeanne Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/29/2020 11:26:00 AM Thank you for your gracious words, Jeanne, and discerning spirit -- Aloha~@wk

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/29/2020 2:36:00 AM A nostalgic image William, so clear, Congrats on your win Tom Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/29/2020 2:43:00 AM With extended courtesies, my friend Tom, to your astute rendering -- Aloha~@wk

Jenish Somadas Date: 6/29/2020 2:15:00 AM Congratulations on your win William.. Great imagery.. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/29/2020 2:21:00 AM A welcomed share, my graceful Jenish, with many thanks indeed -- Aloha~@wk

Jenna Logan Date: 6/28/2020 7:57:00 PM Nostalgic Haiku for a nice combination, William. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/28/2020 8:01:00 PM Sweet pleasantries to your kindness, my dearest Jenna -- Aloha~@wk

Jan Allison Date: 6/28/2020 7:09:00 PM such vivid imagery william, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/28/2020 7:43:00 PM Many thanks sped your way, thought-filled Jan, -- Aloha~@wk

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/28/2020 5:36:00 PM Fabulous haiku with wondrous imagery, William:-) Well-done, sir. Congratulations on your podium finish! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/28/2020 6:14:00 PM A heartfelt thanks indeed, Edward, very thoughtful of you -- Aloha~@wk

Eve Roper Date: 6/28/2020 4:58:00 PM Congratulations on your win, William, great verse. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/28/2020 5:01:00 PM So truly grateful my sweet, Eve, thanks indeed -- Aloha~@wk

Tania Kitchin Date: 6/28/2020 4:07:00 PM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your nostalgic haiku! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/28/2020 4:10:00 PM I am glad to have participated in your challenging contest, Tania, much gratitude indeed -- Aloha~@wk

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/23/2020 6:30:00 PM Sweet picture of the South Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/23/2020 6:43:00 PM My many thanks belle, Kim --Aloha~@wk