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Ageless Summery a porch screen riddled by fragmenting noon beacons ~~grandmas curtain hangs chairs rock as handheld fan waves midst squeaking floorboards ~~iced tea drinks glisten 2020 June 23 *3rd Place* Summer Haiku's ~~Tania Kitchin

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Date: 7/1/2020 12:28:00 AM
Your words weave a painting of summer in motion William. An emotionally intriguing haiku. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/1/2020 12:13:00 PM
A wondrous commentary that sweetens my morning coffee, Aditi, blessings -- Aloha~@William
Date: 6/29/2020 3:09:00 PM
Such authentic memories of summers gone by, William. The graphic made a nice addition; enjoyed your title, too. Congrats on your win in the summer haiku contest ~ John
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:20:00 PM
I am grateful for your insightful reflections, John, truly appreciative am I -- Aloha~@William
Date: 6/29/2020 3:02:00 PM
A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:09:00 PM
My many thanks to you, Funom -- Aloha~@William
Date: 6/29/2020 12:14:00 PM
Your poem dwells in loving memories and creates wonderful summer images uniquely you--well done, William. Congrats on your podium win.
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Date: 6/29/2020 1:12:00 PM
Many thanks for your refreshing share, Vijay, most kind of you -- Aloha~@William
Date: 6/29/2020 9:43:00 AM
Aloha William! What a wonderful image you penned...congratulations on your top placement. Jeanne
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Date: 6/29/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words, Jeanne, and discerning spirit -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/29/2020 2:36:00 AM
A nostalgic image William, so clear, Congrats on your win Tom
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:43:00 AM
With extended courtesies, my friend Tom, to your astute rendering -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/29/2020 2:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win William.. Great imagery..
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:21:00 AM
A welcomed share, my graceful Jenish, with many thanks indeed -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/28/2020 7:57:00 PM
Nostalgic Haiku for a nice combination, William.
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Date: 6/28/2020 8:01:00 PM
Sweet pleasantries to your kindness, my dearest Jenna -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/28/2020 7:09:00 PM
such vivid imagery william, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:43:00 PM
Many thanks sped your way, thought-filled Jan, -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/28/2020 5:36:00 PM
Fabulous haiku with wondrous imagery, William:-) Well-done, sir. Congratulations on your podium finish!
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Date: 6/28/2020 6:14:00 PM
A heartfelt thanks indeed, Edward, very thoughtful of you -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/28/2020 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, William, great verse. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:01:00 PM
So truly grateful my sweet, Eve, thanks indeed -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/28/2020 4:07:00 PM
William, congratulations on your winning placement with your nostalgic haiku!
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Date: 6/28/2020 4:10:00 PM
I am glad to have participated in your challenging contest, Tania, much gratitude indeed -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/23/2020 6:30:00 PM
Sweet picture of the South
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Date: 6/23/2020 6:43:00 PM
My many thanks belle, Kim --Aloha~@wk