William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Ageless Summery

Ageless Summery

a porch screen riddled
by fragmenting noon beacons
     ~~grandmas curtain hangs

chairs rock as handheld
fan waves midst squeaking floorboards
     ~~iced tea drinks glisten

2020 June 23

*3rd Place*

Summer Haiku's
~~Tania Kitchin

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Aditi Mishra July 1, 2020 at 12:28 AM Your words weave a painting of summer in motion William. An emotionally intriguing haiku. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :) William Kelii Kekaula July 1, 2020 at 12:13 PM A wondrous commentary that sweetens my morning coffee, Aditi, blessings -- Aloha~@William

John Watt June 29, 2020 at 3:09 PM Such authentic memories of summers gone by, William. The graphic made a nice addition; enjoyed your title, too. Congrats on your win in the summer haiku contest ~ John William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 3:20 PM I am grateful for your insightful reflections, John, truly appreciative am I -- Aloha~@William

Funom Makama June 29, 2020 at 3:02 PM A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved. William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 3:09 PM My many thanks to you, Funom -- Aloha~@William

Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 12:14 PM Your poem dwells in loving memories and creates wonderful summer images uniquely you--well done, William. Congrats on your podium win. William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 1:12 PM Many thanks for your refreshing share, Vijay, most kind of you -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee June 29, 2020 at 9:43 AM Aloha William! What a wonderful image you penned...congratulations on your top placement. Jeanne William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 11:26 AM Thank you for your gracious words, Jeanne, and discerning spirit -- Aloha~@wk

Tom Cunningham June 29, 2020 at 2:36 AM A nostalgic image William, so clear, Congrats on your win Tom William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 2:43 AM With extended courtesies, my friend Tom, to your astute rendering -- Aloha~@wk

Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 2:15 AM Congratulations on your win William.. Great imagery.. William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 2:21 AM A welcomed share, my graceful Jenish, with many thanks indeed -- Aloha~@wk

Jenna Logan June 28, 2020 at 7:57 PM Nostalgic Haiku for a nice combination, William. William Kelii Kekaula June 28, 2020 at 8:01 PM Sweet pleasantries to your kindness, my dearest Jenna -- Aloha~@wk

Jan Allison June 28, 2020 at 7:09 PM such vivid imagery william, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula June 28, 2020 at 7:43 PM Many thanks sped your way, thought-filled Jan, -- Aloha~@wk

Edward Ibeh June 28, 2020 at 5:36 PM Fabulous haiku with wondrous imagery, William:-) Well-done, sir. Congratulations on your podium finish! William Kelii Kekaula June 28, 2020 at 6:14 PM A heartfelt thanks indeed, Edward, very thoughtful of you -- Aloha~@wk

Eve Roper June 28, 2020 at 4:58 PM Congratulations on your win, William, great verse. Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula June 28, 2020 at 5:01 PM So truly grateful my sweet, Eve, thanks indeed -- Aloha~@wk

Tania Kitchin June 28, 2020 at 4:07 PM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your nostalgic haiku! William Kelii Kekaula June 28, 2020 at 4:10 PM I am glad to have participated in your challenging contest, Tania, much gratitude indeed -- Aloha~@wk

Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2020 at 6:30 PM Sweet picture of the South William Kelii Kekaula June 23, 2020 at 6:43 PM My many thanks belle, Kim --Aloha~@wk