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Ageless Grace

My eyes a reflection upon 
the night, a still-life of 
weft black white threads embroidered lace 
of sketched jagged diamonds.

Drawn steadfastly upon my face 
neatness and precision; 
unturned yet quaintly ageless grace 
as I breathe the new dawn.


8/23/2019

Poetry Contest: CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE 
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud 



   1. The night was a garden of eyes.” – The Blue Bouquet
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Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 5:10 PM
beautiful imagery, Eve.Congrats on a very well deserved win. I see I am not the only one who was drawn to that most inspiring line.
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:44 AM
The line you chose appears to have inspired many of us, Eve! You describe aging with such natural grace. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:00 AM
beautiful portrait of a blossom still flowering through seasons, eve... huge congrats on your wonderful medal with thanks for gracing my contest!..huggs
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