Get Your Premium Membership

Ageing

Does it seem inevitable to you That ageing provide with calmness You get sociopathic too More addicted to aloneness When you were young you felt salvaged Protected by the wise and sane But you’ve grown old and disengaged And everything’s becoming plain The wise support the power drunk Against their will, but maybe not Some of them watch their wisdom sunk They might enjoy it quite a lot And simply put, we are still here Simplicity is not a blame Cause every moment you appear I’m blessed to hear you say my name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/20/2025 7:07:00 AM
I have read your poem and found it interesting and creative. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Login to Reply
Colodub Avatar
Gregory Colodub
Date: 7/20/2025 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your response! I have edited it just now, hope that improved my idea a bit. Gregory

Book: Reflection on the Important Things