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Unguents and lotions for face but the ignored lines on neck speak volumes Written on 08/19/2016 Contest: Monoku by John Hamilton

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:11:00 PM

lol! so true Sara! love this one :) congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 3:54:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2016 10:10:00 AM

That's one give-away that is not easy to conceal, Sara:) Scarfs can come in handy! ~ Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 9:04:00 PM

Sara, gook monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:21:00 PM

I remember this one. Congrats on your win, Sara.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 7:57:00 PM

Yes...how true! Congratulations on your nice win in the Monoku contest, Sara. Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 5:21:00 PM

Hi Sara, There is much truth in this one- liner. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2016 6:46:00 PM

Yeah, tell me about it. hahaha. (is there anything for small lines around the mouth?) I really like this.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2016 6:23:00 PM

Very clever one liner Sara... hands also give it away:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/19/2016 3:33:00 PM

Good one Sara...