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Agawin Sa Apoy Ngayon

A-gawin sa apoy ngayon P-ara maligtas ang tao; R-endahan ng katotohanan, I-layo sa diwang L-ilo. M-aulan at malamig A-ng Hulyo dalawampu't walo; R-umagasa man ang tubig A-y hindi ka maaano. S-agipin sa pagkapahamak, I-sipan nila'y nalason; G-intong aral ang gamitin, A-gawin sa apoy N-gayon.

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Lunarya Mornelithe

Date: 11/30/2024 10:43:00 AM

Such an uplifting and powerful expression of transformation and faith! The repetitive praise and rhythmic flow beautifully reflect the joy and freedom found in embracing a new path in life. The journey from struggle to redemption is vividly portrayed, and the celebration of God’s grace is both personal and profound. This poem radiates hope, strength, and a deep sense of gratitude. Truly inspiring to see the power of faith and redemption through such a passionate, joyful voice.

Lunarya Mornelithe

Date: 11/30/2024 10:39:00 AM

Napakaganda at makapangyarihan ng tula! Ang paraan ng paghalo ng mga imahe at kahulugan, na humihikayat ng aksyon sa harap ng katotohanan at panganib, ay talagang nakakaantig. Ang paggamit ng apoy bilang simbolo ng kagyat na pangangailangan at paraan ng kaligtasan ay isang matalim na kaibahan. Isang magandang paalala na kumilos ngayon at piliin ang karunungan kaysa sa panlilinlang.

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 12/2/2024 4:23:00 PM

Thanks, dear Ma'am Lunarya for reading my work. It means a lot. God bless.