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Again On Night Shift

Again on night shift Tell your boss to change your shift My dear pleasant moon. Submitted on December 09, 2019, for A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Pratap Roy

Date: 1/25/2020 5:49:00 AM

Oh! nicely expressed. God bless you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/25/2020 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Pratap

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/25/2019 4:17:00 AM

Nice one. I worked so many Christmas shifts in my life, but I actually did not mind, although one could not really see the moon in the hospital. Merry Christmas to you, Kai

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/25/2019 4:43:00 AM

hahaha.. Thank you Kai.. Merry Christmas..

George Schaefer

Date: 12/10/2019 6:46:00 PM

but you get to sleep late in the morning? nice haiku/senryu poem.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/10/2019 9:25:00 PM

Thanks George

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/9/2019 5:13:00 PM

Interesting corellation.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/9/2019 8:49:00 PM

Thank you Juliet

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2019 1:11:00 PM

Ha, ha! You really surprised with this adorable last line, Jenish! Thanks! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/9/2019 8:48:00 PM

Thank you Gershon

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2019 6:47:00 AM

Clever and unique! Nicely done, Jenish. All the best.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/9/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thank you Vijay

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/9/2019 6:24:00 AM

Impressive dear, Jenish. Good luck!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/9/2019 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios...

Running Wolves

Date: 12/9/2019 5:21:00 AM

I remember working graveyard shift back in the day. There was a time when I actually preferred that shift. However if the moon ruled the day by changing shifts, imagine the chaos that create. Bwahahahaha... I like it...hehehe

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/9/2019 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Robert... Boss is very strict.. So no change in shift...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/9/2019 3:38:00 AM

A fun read. Made me smile.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/9/2019 3:43:00 AM

If a little smile flowered in your face, i'm honoured..

Na Na

Date: 12/8/2019 10:57:00 PM

Hi Jen. nicely put. I enjoyed the overnight shift when I did it. Best of luck in the contest

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Gregory..