Jenish Somadas Poet Haiku

Again On Night Shift

Again on night shift
Tell your boss to change your shift
My dear pleasant moon.



Submitted on December 09, 2019, for A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Pratap Roy January 25, 2020 at 5:49 AM Oh! nicely expressed. God bless you. Jenish Somadas January 25, 2020 at 6:01 AM Thank you Pratap

Kai Michael Neumann December 25, 2019 at 4:17 AM Nice one. I worked so many Christmas shifts in my life, but I actually did not mind, although one could not really see the moon in the hospital. Merry Christmas to you, Kai Jenish Somadas December 25, 2019 at 4:43 AM hahaha.. Thank you Kai.. Merry Christmas..

George Schaefer December 10, 2019 at 6:46 PM but you get to sleep late in the morning? nice haiku/senryu poem. Jenish Somadas December 10, 2019 at 9:25 PM Thanks George

Juliet Ligon December 9, 2019 at 5:13 PM Interesting corellation. Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 8:49 PM Thank you Juliet

Gershon Wolf December 9, 2019 at 1:11 PM Ha, ha! You really surprised with this adorable last line, Jenish! Thanks! :) gw Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 8:48 PM Thank you Gershon

Vijay Pandit December 9, 2019 at 6:47 AM Clever and unique! Nicely done, Jenish. All the best. Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 9:17 AM Thank you Vijay

Demetrios Trifiatis December 9, 2019 at 6:24 AM Impressive dear, Jenish. Good luck! Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 9:16 AM Thank you Demetrios...

Running Wolves December 9, 2019 at 5:21 AM I remember working graveyard shift back in the day. There was a time when I actually preferred that shift. However if the moon ruled the day by changing shifts, imagine the chaos that create. Bwahahahaha... I like it...hehehe Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 9:16 AM Thank you Robert... Boss is very strict.. So no change in shift...

Caren Krutsinger December 9, 2019 at 3:38 AM A fun read. Made me smile. Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 3:43 AM If a little smile flowered in your face, i'm honoured..

Na Na December 8, 2019 at 10:57 PM Hi Jen. nicely put. I enjoyed the overnight shift when I did it. Best of luck in the contest Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 11:33 PM Thank you Gregory..