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rain unwraps feelings exchange of fervent glances falling in abyss of love? crimson hued twilight breeze oozes lemon fragrance is love ever-lasting? Yes July 11, 2021 Bite-size Poem No. 17 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/29/2021 5:59:00 AM

Rain and romance, evocative, Malaji

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/29/2021 7:15:00 AM

Thanks, Dear Poet. I love rain - it brings back many tender memories.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/14/2021 7:36:00 AM

It sure is, wonderful poem, Malabika:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thanks, Jo. So glad to find your lovely comment. BW~ Mala

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 7/12/2021 11:30:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your romantic write dear Mala... Actually I wanted to write for this contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/12/2021 3:17:00 PM

Thanks, Anitha. Did you write one? I must read! Love ~ Mala