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rain unwraps feelings
                             exchange of fervent glances
                                 falling in abyss of love? 


                                   crimson hued twilight
                              breeze oozes lemon fragrance
                                 is love ever-lasting? Yes






                                          July 11, 2021
                          Bite-size Poem No. 17 Poetry Contest
                                    Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/29/2021 5:59:00 AM
Rain and romance, evocative, Malaji
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/29/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thanks, Dear Poet. I love rain - it brings back many tender memories.
Date: 7/14/2021 7:36:00 AM
It sure is, wonderful poem, Malabika:)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Jo. So glad to find your lovely comment. BW~ Mala
Date: 7/12/2021 11:30:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your romantic write dear Mala... Actually I wanted to write for this contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/12/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thanks, Anitha. Did you write one? I must read! Love ~ Mala

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