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Afternoon Delight

Spring's slipping away

A May shower falls at noon

       The final rainbow

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Harry Horsman

May 18, 2012 at 8:41 AM

Hey Mitch, this is brilliant, harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 16, 2012 at 12:41 PM

I could just imagine that rainbow, all bright with a golden sunny background-- hmmm the term liquid sunshine day come sto mind right now, Mitch! You sure left such a sweet comment in my poem, thank you very much, from one amateur poet to another :D p.s. I love the word "amateur" since it takes its roots from the word for love I believe, to me an amateur will always be a person who does something because of the passion, the love for it. And that's how your poems come across for me.