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Afternoon Delight

Spring's slipping away A May shower falls at noon The final rainbow

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/18/2012 8:41:00 AM

Hey Mitch, this is brilliant, harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/16/2012 12:41:00 PM

I could just imagine that rainbow, all bright with a golden sunny background-- hmmm the term liquid sunshine day come sto mind right now, Mitch! You sure left such a sweet comment in my poem, thank you very much, from one amateur poet to another :D p.s. I love the word "amateur" since it takes its roots from the word for love I believe, to me an amateur will always be a person who does something because of the passion, the love for it. And that's how your poems come across for me.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2012 1:58:00 PM

BTW - I'd marry you in a heartbeat, Mitch. You're such a sweetheart.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2012 10:45:00 AM

Long time no see, Mitch. Glad to catch this lovely haiku here. I love that final line; the final rainbow.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2012 7:42:00 AM

Here in Norway we have one day Spring...next winter...so Spring... and then winter......wery good haiku Mitch! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise