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After the Storm

Fog drapes Cascading sheet Suspended damp blanket Drapes emerald pines' limbs with wet Layers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 9:25 PM
something about the line"drapes emerald pines limbs with wet seems too hard to say. or bad flow. how about ?? drapes emerald limbs with wetness....
Makama Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:16 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
Merryman Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Wonderful, descriptive cinquain, Sara! I can almost feel that damp blanket wrapping around me. Love, Kim
Kiser Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Quite an excellent Cinquain.
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