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After the Storm

Father had no choice the court order was clear, we were taken to that dark place of fear. They took our nice clothes and gave us rags, like children of the street dressed in shags. Abused and beaten cries in the night, we always waited for first light. Not much food to eat each day, you learn how to keep the pain away. Separated for months we were apart, this almost broke my heart. My brother all I had of family, now was gone as I sat absently. On a summer's day he was returned, I was overjoyed but my heart still burned Our Father returned a week after that day, he told us freedom would soon come our way. Innocent victims we did see that day, silently we were lead away. As the doors opened the sun shined bright, we took that step into the light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/27/2013 8:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading after the storm and congratulations on the fine win, Joseph
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/28/2013 6:11:00 AM
Dr Ram, thank you very much.
Date: 12/27/2013 7:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your win ! Light & Love
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/28/2013 6:11:00 AM
Thanks Debbie!
Date: 12/27/2013 2:45:00 PM
Excellent ! 3rd place ! really appreciate the poem you entered . Congratulation's !
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Shanity Rain
Date: 1/2/2014 2:46:00 PM
well written !
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/27/2013 5:08:00 PM
WOW Thanks Shanity! A great contest I enjoyed writing this one is was a challenge.
Date: 11/27/2013 8:31:00 PM
Wow, nicely put. One typo though 5th line from the bottom "freedaom".
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 8:43:00 PM
Wow Scott thanks! I am glad you like it.
Date: 11/27/2013 10:29:00 AM
omg, i totally relate XD sometimes it seems my entire childhood has been one big custody battle, sometimes we didnt see my mom for years
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 8:45:00 PM
It's rough when you are a young victim my brother and I had spent some time in a foster home. Hope things are better for you now Cameron. Glad you like this one
Date: 11/27/2013 9:08:00 AM
Feelin' it Joe, nice! Jimbo
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 8:45:00 PM
Hey Jimbo thanks so much for the words!

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