After the Storm

Father had no choice the court order was clear,
we were taken to that dark place of fear.

They took our nice clothes and gave us rags,
like children of the street dressed in shags.

Abused and beaten cries in the night,
we always waited for first light.

Not much food to eat each day, 
you learn how to keep the pain away.

Separated for months we were apart,
this almost broke my heart.

My brother all I had of family,
now was gone as I sat absently.

On a summer's day he was returned,
I was overjoyed but my heart still burned

Our Father returned a week after that day,
he told us freedom would soon come our way.

Innocent victims we did see that day,
silently we were lead away.

As the doors opened the sun shined bright,
we took that step into the light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Enjoyed reading after the storm and congratulations on the fine win, Joseph
Sergi Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Dr Ram, thank you very much.
Guzzi Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Congrad's on your win ! Light & Love
Sergi Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Thanks Debbie!
Rain Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Excellent ! 3rd place ! really appreciate the poem you entered . Congratulation's !
Rain Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 2:46 PM
well written !
Sergi Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:08 PM
WOW Thanks Shanity! A great contest I enjoyed writing this one is was a challenge.
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 8:31 PM
Wow, nicely put. One typo though 5th line from the bottom "freedaom".
Sergi Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 8:43 PM
Wow Scott thanks! I am glad you like it.
Hartley Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 10:29 AM
omg, i totally relate XD sometimes it seems my entire childhood has been one big custody battle, sometimes we didnt see my mom for years
Sergi Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 8:45 PM
It's rough when you are a young victim my brother and I had spent some time in a foster home. Hope things are better for you now Cameron. Glad you like this one
Goff Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Feelin' it Joe, nice! Jimbo
Sergi Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Hey Jimbo thanks so much for the words!
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