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AFTER THE STORM old daddy sol peeks out wipes his brow wet leaves wave shine especially bright antiphonic joy one bird near another far

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Date: 5/25/2012 5:10:00 AM
Love this write, Daver! Very original metaphor "sol peeks out and wipes his brow".:) You are always shining, Daver! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/11/2012 10:42:00 AM
you are still an awesome poet,
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Date: 5/10/2012 11:39:00 PM
love it love it love it!!
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Date: 5/10/2012 5:06:00 PM
oh joyful and lovely! what is more lovely than a freshly washed world? nicely done, Daver!
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Date: 5/10/2012 4:10:00 PM
Really enjoy haiku, especially your last one.
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:30:00 PM
Daver great set here..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:52:00 PM
Excellent done Daver ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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