Daver Austin Poet Haiku

After the Storm

AFTER THE STORM

old daddy sol
          peeks out
              wipes his brow

wet leaves wave
    shine
      especially bright

antiphonic joy
    one bird near
                another far

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Michelle Mac Donald May 25, 2012 at 5:10 AM Love this write, Daver! Very original metaphor "sol peeks out and wipes his brow".:) You are always shining, Daver! Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Nathan D. May 11, 2012 at 10:42 AM you are still an awesome poet,

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2012 at 11:39 PM love it love it love it!!

Carrie Richards May 10, 2012 at 5:06 PM oh joyful and lovely! what is more lovely than a freshly washed world? nicely done, Daver!

Joann Grisetti May 10, 2012 at 4:10 PM Really enjoy haiku, especially your last one.

David Williams May 10, 2012 at 3:30 PM Daver great set here..David

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2012 at 2:52 PM Excellent done Daver ! - oxox love Anne-Lise