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Home » Poems » Daver Austin » After the Storm

After the Storm 

AFTER THE STORM

old daddy sol
          peeks out
              wipes his brow

wet leaves wave
    shine
      especially bright

antiphonic joy
    one bird near
                another far

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 5/25/2012 5:10:00 AM
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Love this write, Daver! Very original metaphor "sol peeks out and wipes his brow".:) You are always shining, Daver! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Nathan D.
Date: 5/11/2012 10:42:00 AM
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you are still an awesome poet,
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/10/2012 11:39:00 PM
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love it love it love it!!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/10/2012 5:06:00 PM
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oh joyful and lovely! what is more lovely than a freshly washed world? nicely done, Daver!
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 5/10/2012 4:10:00 PM
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Really enjoy haiku, especially your last one.
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David Williams
Date: 5/10/2012 3:30:00 PM
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Daver great set here..David
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2012 2:52:00 PM
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Excellent done Daver ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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