After the Storm

mounds of snow piled high
sun and clouds alternated
snow squalls persisted!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Hey, I see you have quite a few haiku. I will peruse them to see if I've seen them yet or not. Thanks for wishing me luck in the contest with my Life's Sea, but guess what? I forgot to enter it in the contest. Either that, or cyberspace threw me out, and it made me so disappointed. I like this haiku about the aftermath of one of our great storms we have had recently!
Christian Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 3:53 AM
aww well writtten, i love snow LOL thanks for your kind comment God bless you from diane
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January 16, 2011 at 1:21 PM
Oh we have those mounds of snow here in North Dakota so I can relate to your words. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen
Horsman Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Beautiful description, of winter, reminds me of my youth, in England, enjoyed this. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Now this I would love to see again, but there's not much snow in Florida, Carol. I really enjoyed the description of the sun and clouds alternating as the squalls continued. Saw Deb's note below and you should enter the contest if you're from outside the states. As for 3-D -- it's not for me. Love and best wishes, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 2:55 PM
I'm having a contest to HIGHLIGHT poets from out of the USA please enter with the poem YOU like best of yours [any topic or form] The contest is called Foreign Exchange, just put the country you're writing from on the bottom! Light & Love
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January 13, 2011 at 10:01 AM
I forgot to rate it, so here is your rating.
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January 13, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Very nice! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, good work! Keep it up!
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