After the Storm

Like a storm she came into my life
And turned it upside down
Instead of routine and mundane things
We really hit the town

We moved too fast, as we travelled the world
To really consider the cost
But before too long, while swept by her tide
I started to feel quite lost

Where were the things that I held so dear?
When was there time to be me?
Why was the giving all one way?
Who am I? and who should I be?

So when the source of the good times ran out
She was quickly out the door
Couldn’t she see I loved her so much?
That I held her in such awe?

I know I shouldn’t really cry
These tears should not be set free
But the pain is so bad, and what makes me sad
Is I always thought we were we

Now when I actually open my eyes
The truth becomes suddenly clear
It wasn’t my love or my heart she desired
Her affection was never sincere

Now I shall have to rebuild again
A new phase of me will begin
The strength I have to console myself
Is the strength of my spirit within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Nigel - Far to often this happens in life - Just got to keep trying because the right one is out there looking for you as hard as you are her - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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February 4, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Yes Nigel dust yourself off and begin again Congratulations your featured poem of the week! Love Laura :)
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February 3, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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February 3, 2009 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations Nigel, on "After The Storm" being featured. My friend used to tell me love was grand but divorce was 100 grand. Great write. Vince
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February 2, 2009 at 8:12 PM
This piece really bares the soul and puts your vulnerabilities out there for all to see. Bravo for the courage to do so. I know as I writer I am driven to do the same, so maybe courage has nothing to do with it more than the need to just express such emotions. Well done, and congratulations on being featured. Donna G.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:56 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Nigel Rgds Brian
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February 1, 2009 at 4:07 PM
We are all looking for that one in a life time, long lasting, real love which is very rare. Important is to possess the strength of getting out of fake relationships and to keep alive the desire of looking for your destined soulmate. He/she is out there!!! Congratulations for being featured Nigel! Love, iolanda
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February 1, 2009 at 2:56 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Love the last line--the strength of spirit and faith in God definitely gets us through the tough times. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Keep up the good writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
Mason Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 1:57 PM
Sounds like she just wanted the "trip", Nigel ... smile ... wonderful write that reads like a song and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week. Congratulations!!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:16 PM
Really good work on this Nigel..congrats on the feature.
Winter Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 11:41 AM
Sorry to have missed this Nigel, and so sorry for your heartache. Congratulations on a wonderful featured write. Love, Shar
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