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After the Romance

after the romance
came boredom and arguments
then divorce papers

*hope this isn’t too bleak – I read the form should be cynical or darkly humorous

25th January for Francine’s Romantic Senryu contest

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/28/2012 11:29:00 AM not too bleak Jack ..more like stone cold truth my friend.. good luck in contest luv.. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/28/2012 5:30:00 AM Good one jack.Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 1/26/2012 7:45:00 PM i heard the last survey, 70% of marriage is broken now. this hit home jack. good luck on the contest. Login to Reply

Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/25/2012 11:35:00 PM It is good to see a different slant on the title of romance- good one- not the subject matter but good write, blessings, Bren Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/25/2012 7:39:00 PM ARE you saying francine's contest said to be cynical? Or you read somewhere that senryu is generally that way? hmmm. IN any event,I think this can work well for her contest. YOur title was a great one for what you wrote, jack! Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 1/25/2012 4:41:00 PM But it's oh so true too. Sort of like "Love is bline, But marriage is an eye opener." Good job. God Bless, JB Tha ks for your comments on Einstein. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/25/2012 1:32:00 PM Got some truth in what you have penned..Sad but it happens..Enjoyed ..Good luck in Francine's contest..Could be a winner ...Sara Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 1/25/2012 1:18:00 PM Ha ha,good one, love it. Elizabeth Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2012 1:16:00 PM I think it is perfectly Jack. oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/25/2012 12:46:00 PM Very witty, Jack. I didn't now senryu need to be cynical, but you certainly captured the dark humor here. Best wishes in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply