Matthew Anish Poet Ballad

After the Rock Concert Is Over

The heights were reached 

         with the help of hasheesh

but the dancing and 

    the sound 

has stopped 

   The crowd in the park 

        exits 

and silence takes over 

    once again 

   Do you sincerely believe 

that all pain 

    was negated by the deafening sound? 

Well, it was great 

    but one must answer to fate 

  ONE MUST ANSWER TO FATE!

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Dr.Ram Mehta October 30, 2013 at 5:27 AM Very provoking use of hasheesh, Matthew

Connie Marcum Wong October 29, 2013 at 10:42 PM I love the way you ended this wonderful poem Matthew. I do believe in FATE.

Karen Anglesey October 29, 2013 at 10:49 AM Matthew, wow ...you have created such a broad scope of provoking thought in this powerful piece. Speechless !