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After the Ice Storm - hiku for Brian


ice-encased tree limbs
glisten in dawn’s stillness . . .
a lone fawn wanders

winterhaiku

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Silent One

January 9, 2024 at 2:14 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..maybe we all should enter this form lol..

Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2024 at 2:24 AM

Ahhh!!! Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Poor fawn, I am now wondering about his/her situation. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Mulu Magdalinos

January 9, 2024 at 12:21 AM

Hello Andrea,a beautiful hiku! Blessings!

Robert Warlov

January 8, 2024 at 5:21 AM

Growing pains.

Joseph May

January 7, 2024 at 12:39 PM

You depict the stillness of a wintry scene well Andrea, I enjoyed the read

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2024 at 11:10 PM

thanks, Joseph.

Ink Empress

January 7, 2024 at 9:58 AM

This is so well written dear andrea. You always do these short forms so well and hiku too i bet brian will enjoy, i especially love the opening and the last line, so unique and picturesque, i wonder what the weather is like where you are at? Do you get snow? best wishes for the contest dear andrea

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2024 at 10:45 AM

Not as much snow as in the old days. In Kentucky once I experienced an ice storm which dazzled all the trees. This is kind of my memory of it. Thanks.

Duke Beaufort

January 7, 2024 at 9:07 AM

This creates a very strong image in my head and that tells me you did really well with this. I wonder if a screenwriter would ever make a movie storyboard entirely of haikus. You could do it for them....no doubt. Funny thought, but you would be able to do it. It's hard for me to comprehend how productive you are in terms of all this art, but I am very thankful you are!

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2024 at 9:43 AM

Thanks even if I don't really know if I did really well with this. Thanks for your sweet compliment, Duke.

James Peranteau

January 6, 2024 at 11:43 PM

brrrrr....i'm dig'n this write Andrea; i love bucolic scenery..i live smack in it! i gotta read the write right quick about where you grew up...later, me

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2024 at 10:46 AM

Thanks, James