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After the Fury

Brazen night winds crash brittle glass of our furious voices
Quieting down, we slowly climb inside eyes lit with dear splendor
A flood of kisses roam north to west of mouths--- drowning stars

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Eve Roper

January 29, 2015 at 4:05 PM

Nette, love the imagery on this write, a 7. Kisses roam Blessings dear friend Eve

Poet Destroyer A

August 15, 2012 at 11:23 PM

Nette, Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 15, 2012 at 5:21 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest Nette.

Lee Ramage

August 13, 2012 at 7:33 PM

Congratulations on your win Nette. So nice to read your work. Lee

David Williams

August 13, 2012 at 2:27 AM

Nette, congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

August 13, 2012 at 1:21 AM

Nette,, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 7, 2012 at 8:06 AM

Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 5, 2012 at 9:26 PM

Congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 5, 2012 at 1:42 PM

congrats on your win nette, after the fury comes the making up...great imagery, a different take on the theme :-)

David Williams

February 5, 2012 at 9:05 AM

Nette congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 5, 2012 at 8:29 AM

congrats Nette luv on a terrific third place win for these excitng sijo lines of kisses.. luv the vocab in this piece.. so stunning my friend..

Andrea Dietrich

February 1, 2012 at 9:09 PM

I like the metaphor of this one. Very interesting sijo writing, my friend! Good luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 31, 2012 at 7:43 AM

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Nette. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

January 31, 2012 at 5:34 AM

there is enough to think about for a while in this piece..luv, jag

Gwendolen Song

January 31, 2012 at 5:13 AM

As I dissect this sijo written by the master, I can see where I have much growing to do..your elements distinctly stand out and instruct me...thanks! This looks like a great makeup scene. lol.. Gwendolen

Bl Devnath

January 30, 2012 at 9:05 PM

Lovely flood of kisses enjoyed. Best wishes for the contest, loved, bl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

January 30, 2012 at 8:22 PM

I have read this a few times and find more beauty with every read! Furious voices leading to floods of kisses. I can't get enough!

Russell Sivey

January 30, 2012 at 8:10 PM

Ahhhh now that is sweet bliss Nette! I love the roaming of the kiss from north to west! I was going to have the kiss be rolling but it didn't fit in well with what I was doing! This is a fantastic write here Nette, I really enjoyed it immensely! Such sweet descriptions you have written! Great Work!!