After the Crash a Haiku

AFTER THE CRASH

                                       Blazing dawn
                                       Chases  toxic night
                                       Nurse enters

Victoria Anderson-Throop ©
12-21-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 5:56 PM
I like the contrast of the dawn and the night, victoria. Hope all is well with you now.
Henderson Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 1:06 PM
your poem exudes a definite feeling of anxietry. Good one .
Williams Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Victoria very good haiku, hope things are working out for you...David
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December 22, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Very nice Victoria.Enjoyed the read.
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