After Sunset

The reddened riot of wine-rich sun
Spills over skies of afternoon,
And purpling-reds of the day now done
Splash!--then dissolve, so soon.

And sunset turns a violet grey
Mixing with twilight’s magic blur,
Revealing the fairy-shapes at play,
Listen!--to wings’ soft whir.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bellefleur Avatar
January 28, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Beautifully done - such rich color imagery... Very creative..
Golden Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 7:42 PM
This is gorgeous, Steve. Beautiful imagery you have created...along with a soft ambiance. Very nicely done. Donna G.
Nichols Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 6:30 PM
I really love the way you paint the image. The use of human tone is relative in perfect places. Love too read more ! Kelsi
Riley Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 5:57 PM
Beautiful imagery, I marvel at the sunsets, Gods wonders of color, fire in the sky. Well done, a joy to read. Judy Riley
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