Placed Fourth in : For What Happened After Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Checked by www.howmanysyllables.com>syllable_counter **************************************************************** After Pink Clouds The pink clouds soon fade away, Soberness I now regain, Soul`s pains I do feel again, Still I slip straight on the bed; With dawn, I rise with some stress, But life follows on its course As rivers flow to the sea.
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