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After Noon

dreadnaughts split the sky whorl motions of atmospheres merse the wicked sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 10/12/2014 8:17:00 PM
Hey thanks for that comparison to Dickens. I love that writer!! This haiku is really something!! your vocabulary is so elegant. A very smart haiku.
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