After Noon

dreadnaughts split the sky
whorl motions of atmospheres
merse the wicked sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Hey thanks for that comparison to Dickens. I love that writer!! This haiku is really something!! your vocabulary is so elegant. A very smart haiku.
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