After I'm Gone

Fading from this earth I am
A mere shadow in the sky.
As my image disappears
Through the white clouds flying high.
Do not weep because you see
In your heart with you I stay,
Locked within your memory.

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Christine Watts

July 23, 2025 at 5:25 AM

Hi Rowena Thank you very much for your lovely review of my poem. I a glad you thought it tender snd heartfelt Cheers Christine

Rowena Velasco

July 23, 2025 at 4:37 AM

Christine, this poem is a gentle and comforting reflection on loss and remembrance. The imagery of fading like a shadow among clouds beautifully conveys the transient nature of life, while the assurance of staying locked within the heart offers solace. A tender and heartfelt piece.

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2025 at 5:38 PM

I went a bit different way with mine but we both used the clouds. In reference to your comment on our shared wins in a certain contest. I consider it a loss. Geeez

Susantha Herath

July 18, 2025 at 11:40 PM

This short poem is deeply moving and beautifully written.It manages to speak of departure without evoking fear, and of remembrance without clinging to sorrow. It’s tender, mature, and very human. Well done.

Christine Watts

July 19, 2025 at 4:51 AM

Hi Susantha Many thanks for your lovely review it really made my day Cheers Christine