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After Forever a Bike Courier's Lament

Two wheeled bliss a life Intrepid traffic rider Slow lane on a trike 17.12.21 Composed for John Lawless' "After Forever"

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James Horn
Date: 12/31/2017 6:02:00 PM
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Carrier Intrepid in New York Harbor was ship my dad was killed on.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 11:42:00 AM
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what a wonderful visual Maureen:-) hugs jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/23/2017 11:55:00 AM
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Thank you Jan, I didn't expect to place, rather delighted to entertain! I'm trying something new, when too many words swirl in my noggin I'm opting to Senryu it :) xomo!
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Neha Padhi
Date: 12/23/2017 4:32:00 AM
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An adventurousl new forever.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/23/2017 6:57:00 AM
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It is a new adventure, at a welcome slower speed, and a cargo trike I can take the dog with me :) Thank you for your lovely visits Neha!
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Silent One
Date: 12/22/2017 5:02:00 AM
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Lol...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/22/2017 8:11:00 AM
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Best part of big ass cargo trike is no more fear of door prizes <3
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/22/2017 12:42:00 AM
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I am not sure, that often seemed like the fast lane to me!!!!! great write!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/22/2017 8:07:00 AM
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& thank you :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/22/2017 8:06:00 AM
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I like your speed :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 12/21/2017 7:13:00 PM
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What a ride... nice and easy in the slow lane...All the best Maureen
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/21/2017 9:21:00 PM
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Exactly :) thank you Arturo xomo!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 4:01:00 PM
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I see you fearless rider--you painted this picture well..best for a win!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/21/2017 5:42:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay :) fearless was xo

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