Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Senryu

After Forever a Bike Courier's Lament

Two wheeled bliss a life
                                            Intrepid traffic rider
                                            Slow lane on a trike








17.12.21

Composed for John Lawless'
"After Forever"

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James Horn December 31, 2017 at 6:02 PM Carrier Intrepid in New York Harbor was ship my dad was killed on.

Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 11:42 AM what a wonderful visual Maureen:-) hugs jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 23, 2017 at 11:55 AM Thank you Jan, I didn't expect to place, rather delighted to entertain! I'm trying something new, when too many words swirl in my noggin I'm opting to Senryu it :) xomo!

Neha Padhi December 23, 2017 at 4:32 AM An adventurousl new forever. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 23, 2017 at 6:57 AM It is a new adventure, at a welcome slower speed, and a cargo trike I can take the dog with me :) Thank you for your lovely visits Neha!

Silent One December 22, 2017 at 5:02 AM Lol... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 22, 2017 at 8:11 AM Best part of big ass cargo trike is no more fear of door prizes <3

Arthur Vaso December 22, 2017 at 12:42 AM I am not sure, that often seemed like the fast lane to me!!!!! great write! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 22, 2017 at 8:07 AM & thank you :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 22, 2017 at 8:06 AM I like your speed :)

Arturo Michael December 21, 2017 at 7:13 PM What a ride... nice and easy in the slow lane...All the best Maureen Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 21, 2017 at 9:21 PM Exactly :) thank you Arturo xomo!

Vijay Pandit December 21, 2017 at 4:01 PM I see you fearless rider--you painted this picture well..best for a win! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 21, 2017 at 5:42 PM Thank you Vijay :) fearless was xo