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After 'After After'

is a folliow up to

After 'After'

which was a follow-up to

'After'

I hope that's clear.

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The vessel had travelled through space for so long Two armageddons had come and had gone Nuclear warfare had first come to pass The asteroid followed and kicked the Earth’s ass Each was foreseen and the ruling machine Built a craft for an escape quick and clean Leaders and medics and scholars selected Plain simple folk, if they tried, were ejected Each man and woman aboard had a bed And tubes in their torso and probes in their head They slept like the dead with their vitals held steady On a circular trip until Earth was deemed ready One thousand years passed and they started to wake The ship’s console lit and engaged the main brake The President of the U.S. watched the screen The leader of Russia seemed equally keen So now it was time to rebuild a new Earth A chance to give this ravaged world a new birth The leaders of nations that once were enraged Chose men to converse and be fully engaged * At this point I ask if I may interject It would be quite easy to be circumspect In all of man’s history there’s been no chance To get warring leaders to dance the same dance * So man has the power to build Earth again It’s there to be grasped by significant men One said It’s great, really great, but, fake news One had a syringe…he was ready to use

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Date: 5/20/2024 9:01:00 PM
I've always felt that the 'end' is something akin to this... kind of like the gang of thieves, where each keeps killing the other guy off, until there are only two left. My guess is Putin and Chi. Though my money's on 'Darth Tu Thi.' :) gw
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Date: 5/14/2024 12:58:00 PM
sad to say, terry, but your ending is exactly what i'd expect (even after 1,000 years!). still, i loved your poem and enjoyed the journey...
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/14/2024 2:31:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. I think that’s the ‘After’ saga pretty much done with now. I mean… the orange one and Putin rebuilding a brave new world?… don’t hold your breath. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 5/14/2024 10:48:00 AM
Lol, wouldn't hold my breath on mankind rebuilding the earth, making a right mess of it so far. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/14/2024 2:34:00 PM
Ha ha! I just said pretty much the same thing to Ilene (above). Thanks for dropping in ;-)
Date: 5/13/2024 5:13:00 PM
your last couple of poems spoke of your creative genius, Terry. So much hidden within your lines in this one. These words spoke a resounding truth/reality to me: In all of man’s history there’s been no chance To get warring leaders to dance the same dance I also appreciate your reference to 'fake news.' A sad state of affairs indeed. Enjoyed your creativity. Have a great evening, Sara
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/13/2024 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I was a little reticent to treat this as part of the ‘After’ saga but I couldn't hide from the fact that it seemed to follow. I guess it’s telling us that we are the masters of our own destiny and thus… we’re doomed!

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