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After four days of charcoal clouds With intermittent pouring rain The longed for sunshine appeared It's glory eased my pain I told my husband let's go out Visit nature's wonder We road around the edge of forest Enjoying each minute with no thunder We rode by pomegranate bushes Bursting from swollen seeds Because of days of pouring rain But the ground fairly free of weeds Then downward to Swift creek to see its capacity after the rain It was up and stained but gone down Since the last downpour's reign Sound of fast water rushing to the seas.... in the stillness~ calm The rocky places sounded like A small waterfall's music Nothing at all like my writings Most seem anacoluthic

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Date: 11/3/2021 8:38:00 AM
Sara, Fabulous pictures and a touchy story in this poem. Delightful reading. Have a nice day! ~Max
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2021 2:31:00 PM
Thank you for your visit to my page and taking time to leave a kind review. Sara
Date: 10/27/2021 2:24:00 AM
Enjoyed your walk Sara, nothing like a waterfall to uplift spirits..Delice
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Date: 11/3/2021 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Delice..I don't do walking anymore but mostly we ride on a golf cart. Old age isn't made for sissies. Sara
Date: 10/23/2021 11:14:00 AM
What a beautiful story/write and picture. Wish I was in your picture by the water. Have a blessed autumn day writing away.............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/23/2021 2:04:00 PM
Paula, The rushing water can be calming because of the negative ions. I hope you have some stream in your neighborhood to enjoy from time to time. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 10/13/2021 5:50:00 PM
Hello Sara ... a nice descriptive poem in what appears an idyllic place to ride your bikes and take it all in - thank you Sara - Lindsay
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Date: 10/14/2021 4:04:00 AM
Lindsay, Well, I guess maybe a mountain bike. I used to walk some down there but no longer, gone are those days. Sara
Date: 10/11/2021 1:28:00 AM
You outdid yourself Sara. A very grand poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/11/2021 4:42:00 AM
Why thank you, Victor. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Date: 10/10/2021 11:26:00 AM
Aw this is so beautiful with great imagery ... Your flowing imagery took me to that place where I could hear the sound of fast water rushing to the seas in silent stillness... I had to search for the meaning of the word 'anacoluthic'... and your writing is perfect and excellent Sara... Love and respect... ~ Ani
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/10/2021 11:53:00 AM
Anitha, Glad that you looked up a word. Now you know a new one and probably will remember it.Also, don't work yourself into a corner using the word music. LOL.. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

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