Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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After a Stormy Week

After four days of charcoal clouds
With intermittent pouring rain
The longed for sunshine appeared
It's glory eased my pain

I told my husband let's go out
Visit nature's wonder
We road around the edge of forest
Enjoying each minute with no thunder

We rode by pomegranate bushes
Bursting from swollen seeds
Because of days of pouring rain
But the ground fairly free of weeds

Then downward to Swift creek
to see its capacity after the rain
It was up and stained but gone down
Since the last downpour's reign

Sound of fast water
rushing to the seas....
in the stillness~ calm

The rocky places sounded like
A small waterfall's music
Nothing at all like my writings
Most seem anacoluthic 
  

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Maximilian G. Wolf November 3, 2021 at 8:38 AM Sara, Fabulous pictures and a touchy story in this poem. Delightful reading. Have a nice day! ~Max Sara Kendrick November 3, 2021 at 2:31 PM Thank you for your visit to my page and taking time to leave a kind review. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly October 27, 2021 at 2:24 AM Enjoyed your walk Sara, nothing like a waterfall to uplift spirits..Delice Sara Kendrick November 3, 2021 at 2:28 PM Thank you, Delice..I don't do walking anymore but mostly we ride on a golf cart. Old age isn't made for sissies. Sara

Paula Goldsmith October 23, 2021 at 11:14 AM What a beautiful story/write and picture. Wish I was in your picture by the water. Have a blessed autumn day writing away............. Sara Kendrick October 23, 2021 at 2:04 PM Paula, The rushing water can be calming because of the negative ions. I hope you have some stream in your neighborhood to enjoy from time to time. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Lindsay Laurie October 13, 2021 at 5:50 PM Hello Sara ... a nice descriptive poem in what appears an idyllic place to ride your bikes and take it all in - thank you Sara - Lindsay Sara Kendrick October 14, 2021 at 4:04 AM Lindsay, Well, I guess maybe a mountain bike. I used to walk some down there but no longer, gone are those days. Sara

Victor Buhagiar October 11, 2021 at 1:28 AM You outdid yourself Sara. A very grand poem. Sara Kendrick October 11, 2021 at 4:42 AM Why thank you, Victor. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar October 10, 2021 at 11:26 AM Aw this is so beautiful with great imagery ... Your flowing imagery took me to that place where I could hear the sound of fast water rushing to the seas in silent stillness... I had to search for the meaning of the word 'anacoluthic'... and your writing is perfect and excellent Sara... Love and respect... ~ Ani Sara Kendrick October 10, 2021 at 11:53 AM Anitha, Glad that you looked up a word. Now you know a new one and probably will remember it.Also, don't work yourself into a corner using the word music. LOL.. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara