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After a Days Work

after a days work i am ready to 
unwind
drink a beer smoke a blunt just to 
ease my mind
to also put me in a mode to relieve 
my stress
and stay focused on my task which 
is being the best
sometimes i just chill and stay in the 
house
it depends on how i feel whether or 
not i'll go out
and be amongst friends as we paint 
the town
i don't have a clue as to what may 
go down
i just go with the flow and enjoy my 
life
after a days work it's my god given 
right
to kick up my feet and do as i please
it's up to me when i get off what i 
do with my cheese

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 10:17:00 AM
I have that song I got a feeling lol from the black eyed peas poppin in my head lol, nice write on a after a days work, i like the cheese line haha, spend it on junk food is more than likely what i'd do XD, =(^.^)=Royal
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Date: 8/13/2010 8:46:00 PM
tHaTs RiGHT LOL "god given right!!, enjOyEd *LUV- S.K.A.T.
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:20:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Orlandus. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2010 5:57:00 AM
wow!!!!!! really good!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!!
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