African Girl

I'm walking miles for water
I drag my aching feet
There's no shelter or escape
From this torturous , scorching heat
My ewer I hold balanced
Upon my tiny head
I dream of cool ,clean water
And the thought of being fed
My siblings cry with hunger
There's sores upon their eyes
The stench is all around us 
and it's drawing all the flies
How can we all continue
Through this unbelievable strife
I feel there is no ending
To this they call a life .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 2:25 PM
What an amazing heart-wrenching write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! A 7! Hugs. Pandita
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Congrats, Jennie, on your heartbreaking write!
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Beautiful write and so very heartfelt, Jennie, congratulations on your win
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Jennie, It breaks my heart to see those suffer not even having the basic necessities of life. I pray the drought will end and those who need help most are in the Angel's care. Congratulations on your deserving win. 7 ; )
Neumann Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations Jennie. How indeed, can we all continue, other than carrying the waters in our poems. Well done, Kai
Brown Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:51 PM
Thank you Kai for your kind words .
Kinch  Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Just love this Jennie, fabulous imagery, emotive and thought provoking. Ditto to Niall's comment, we have so little to complain about.
Brown Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 2:52 AM
Thank you Elizabeth for your lovely support .
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