Afraid To Dance

Your eyes, your words they so entrance
such magic from a simple glance
t'would be an honor to take a chance,
the truth, alas, I'm afraid to dance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 10:16 PM
Very nice piece! Enjoyed it! A 7 for me! :) love and hugs! xxxx D
Brown Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Thank you Dorian
Nunez Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Provocative, evocative...your fluid lines make me think of the best red wines! Thanks for sharing this David. New friend Kim:)
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Why thank you new friend, but this ain't the end, I simply can't wait to read what you've penned!
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 5:48 PM
beautiful rhyme David:-) Hugs Jan x
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Thanks as always, kind lady :)
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