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Afraid To Care

I see a girl and I ask myself, Isn’t she a beauty? But I’m reminded of a scare. I see that girl and I wish to myself, What a picture we’d be. But I just don’t dare. I see that girl and I tell myself To try and see, But I’m afraid I’ll care. I see the girl and berate myself, Tell her of me. But I’m afraid to bare. I see that girl and I ask myself, What does she see? And I wish I could share …

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Date: 5/13/2010 8:49:00 PM
afraid, insecurity is a buz kill lol, nice write
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Date: 5/13/2010 12:31:00 PM
I really like this. The way you formed it made it have more of an impact and easy to relate to, like spurts of thoughts. Nice write.
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