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Afraid To Breathe

The tick tock of the clock Never stops In quiet trepidation My heart doesn't beat, it knocks Insomniac and mind tripping I see my life slipping I want to breathe in air Never again be scared But the only thing that clings to me Is constant worry and despair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/6/2013 5:45:00 PM
Welcome to the soup! I've read several of your poems tonight. They all touched on many of the more difficult aspects of living. Given the number of poems you posted on your first two days, I'm going to be watching for more. Jack
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Date: 2/6/2013 5:25:00 PM
I can relate. Good poem - JH
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:07:00 PM
Your poem is fantastic, Madelin. The situation you are in doesn't sound so good. Hope things get better. Love, Kim
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