Afraid

I dislike it when you don't talk to me. When you say you never really loved me. Why do you don't like me so? no wonder my self-esteem is low. But what I'm really afraid of is to say that I love you...... This poem goes out to Justin Younker, Sam Kreps, And Ed Owens........ THANK YOU!

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Rick Parise

Date: 9/1/2008 9:03:00 PM

Risk everthing and say it!!! or you will never know -If this poem is your life--If its third person twist it abit more Rick Parise ---------Salem oregon

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/31/2008 6:50:00 PM

Alexz, Be you. Never try to be someone for someone else. Be you. Face your fears and they will go away. Take the first steps. God Bless. Vince

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/31/2008 3:37:00 PM

you only 15 years old and you write poetry very well, that is good sign, but you also have pain of some kind of abuse? let your writing be that release as well as your amagination, read the bible and envision that situation and then write it. read the dictionary, one where they also use sentences. foster care and abuse so I know of you feel. not sexually but physical. thats what got me into writing and etc.

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/31/2008 3:21:00 PM

I turned 30 on 8/16 anyway keep up the good work on the poem dont feel comfortable talking to you bout that topic, dont be offended. your a child and Im grown. thanks

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/31/2008 3:09:00 PM

if you were born a boy, your a boy and you like girls. a girl likes boys, 15 is to young for love or figuring out what you want right right now. for now stay focused on school and the rest will follow. OH and keep writing poems WRITE ON.

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/31/2008 10:07:00 AM

deep, but anyway forget that girl and always love your self no matter what. great poem ffilled with unnessary pain.