Aflame

a smile embedded
too vast, even for the sky
the horizon burns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gi-Sa Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Another great little piece!
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Nice haiku
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:05 PM
OH, I have not seen you for a while. I do so love reading your haiku!! this is lovely. LUv, Andrea
K. Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 10:50 AM
This really comes across as quite vivid for me Grace! Very nice!! Really liked that first line especially -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:18 PM
wow, that sight made quite the impression. I love when you want to write about something in different ways beause it is so marvelous!
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Nice images. Good luck if for the contest
Falotico Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 6:12 AM
Nice picture you paint here...Michael
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