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When ,she and I become we True love for us,may not be- 'til I love her,who loves me This Shalespeare style triplet was inspired by John Donne's phrase in 'Love's Deitie'

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Date: 7/22/2010 2:21:00 PM
Very beautiful..if for the contest.. good luck..Brian.. powerful piece.. with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:42:00 PM
It takes two for sure..Interesting thoughts penned..Short expressive write in just three lines..Seven syllables per lines with all three lines rhyming? Sara
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Date: 7/15/2010 8:05:00 AM
Good job here Brian...God Bless...Taz
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