Affianced

When ,she and I become we
True love for us,may not be-
'til I love her,who loves me

This Shalespeare style triplet was inspired by John Donne's phrase in 'Love's Deitie'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Very beautiful..if for the contest.. good luck..Brian.. powerful piece.. with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 4:42 PM
It takes two for sure..Interesting thoughts penned..Short expressive write in just three lines..Seven syllables per lines with all three lines rhyming? Sara
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July 15, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Good job here Brian...God Bless...Taz
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