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life free of AFFECTion is a HELL of Anger, isis . i'm looking for an act. tracing to Affection.

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Date: 6/15/2016 12:55:00 AM
Mohammad Jon Salam, Haiku is usually three lines. Next time, why not Ghazal or masnavi . Nicely done
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Date: 3/26/2016 6:19:00 AM
Need of tenderness is a human one. Without love, all have little meaning. Bible and Koran may teach us mercy, that in honest heart grows without contradictions hatred and violence. If truth is a basic need, fidelity and care of life teach us to hear the voice of suffering.
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Date: 3/26/2016 8:11:00 AM
right you are. there is a big gap between the written issues and my (man) deed. in short, the Book and man's deed doesn't overlap. Thanks for your comment.