Aeronautical Origami

AERONAUTICAL ORIGAMI
It was my father taught me How to make a paper plane. Aerodynamically perfect, He’d hit the target time and again. And one day, in desperation, I decided to use the art To try to make an impression And win a young lady’s heart. I’d fallen in love with Jill Smithers On the very first day at school, But never got round to telling her, In case she thought me a fool. And so I made a paper plane, Just as my dad had taught, And put a little note inside, Telling her what I thought. I launched it across the classroom, Carefully aimed at Jill, But soon it became apparent That I lacked my father’s skill. It veered one way then to the other, It had a mind of its own. Until, as watched in horror, It suddenly dropped like a stone. It didn’t land on Jill’s desk, As I had hoped it would. Instead, it landed in the lap Of a boy called Charlie Good. My note said, “Meet in the playground” And, at lunchtime he was there. He said he hadn’t realised That love was in the air. Twenty years have passed since then And we are together still. He says he’s forever grateful That I lacked my father’s skill. 21th August 2022 Paper Airplanes poetry contest Sponsor - John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Miller Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 1:37 AM
Excellent, and a hearty congratulations.
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 6:24 AM
Bryn, this one had me from the title to the final line. Thanks for entering the contest
Draper Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 12:25 AM
Wow, I really enjoyed this poem :) it made me smile and had a great twist at the end. Cheers Julie
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace