Aerial Rodeo

smoke ring from rouged lips rises, lassos the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 8:23 AM
How delightful, Bernard. Splendid monoku.
Chan Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 4:45 AM
Thanks a million, Line!
Ashley Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 9:29 PM
A brilliant, enchanting, enticing and sensual write Bernard. Your imagery is completely captivating, artistic and romantic. This creates a very strong and alluring visual that allows one to linger over and imagine.. a wealth of riches in so few syllables - an absolutely beautiful write my friend.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Chan Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 4:10 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely words, Susan! Have a wonderful Xmas!! :)
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