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Aerial Rodeo

smoke ring from rouged lips rises, lassos the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/15/2018 8:23:00 AM
How delightful, Bernard. Splendid monoku.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/16/2018 4:45:00 AM
Thanks a million, Line!
Date: 12/23/2017 9:29:00 PM
A brilliant, enchanting, enticing and sensual write Bernard. Your imagery is completely captivating, artistic and romantic. This creates a very strong and alluring visual that allows one to linger over and imagine.. a wealth of riches in so few syllables - an absolutely beautiful write my friend.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Bernard Chan
Date: 12/24/2017 4:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely words, Susan! Have a wonderful Xmas!! :)

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