Aerial Rodeo

smoke ring from rouged lips rises, lassos the moon

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/15/2018 8:23:00 AM

How delightful, Bernard. Splendid monoku.

Bernard Chan
Date: 2/16/2018 4:45:00 AM

Thanks a million, Line!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/23/2017 9:29:00 PM

A brilliant, enchanting, enticing and sensual write Bernard. Your imagery is completely captivating, artistic and romantic. This creates a very strong and alluring visual that allows one to linger over and imagine.. a wealth of riches in so few syllables - an absolutely beautiful write my friend.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Bernard Chan
Date: 12/24/2017 4:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Susan! Have a wonderful Xmas!! :)