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Rhymes In Nine 2 Poetry Contest

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The sea never dulls me; it lulls, calms and relaxes me. It sends me into a trance, like when I dance, in a state of peace. In stillness, I feel free, serene, glee; yet, aware of things I hear and see. The Aegean Sea cruise in Turkey rendered spectacular views, while we were amused and bemused by our guide with a big smile with Greece in Europe and Turkey in Asia with glory of each nation and story of the sea. In Thera, stood, gazed at the moon’s glow on the blue hue of the sea, at the hotel’s own beach, talked how our fun in the sun tour would cease. Sunshine made blue domes glistened and the sea clear blue, a must see!

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Date: 10/27/2024 11:48:00 AM
Cruising the ocean blue as the sea relaxes you, Congrats on your win Marilene, Very nicely penned
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Marilene Evans
Date: 10/28/2024 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, thank you. Have a great rest of the day!
Date: 10/7/2024 2:51:00 PM
Wow. This is beautiful. I enjoyed this :)
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Marilene Evans
Date: 10/7/2024 3:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi. Have a good evening.

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