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Now, if only I could follow my own advice...

Advice To the Newlyweds

The more patient you are
   the happier you'll be

   Never become angry
You won't regret it, you'll see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Smith Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Good advice, Unfortunately some people become parents before they are wed. Maybe teachers should be given that advice to spread the word. Like how you use encouragement at end of key points - the happier you will be and you'll see. Positive piece despite subject. You would I think be a good motivational speaker. Keep them coming. Best regards David in NZ
Cheney Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Sage advice.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 12:15 PM
And yet we are human…
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:22 PM
And yet we are bloomin'
Green Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 11:58 AM
That makes two of us. I know my household would be a lot happier if I only listened and kept my mouth shut. : )
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:22 PM
Ha, ha. If I kept my mouth shut at home, Chris, where would the flies settle?!
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October 12, 2021 at 8:33 PM
So true, Gershon, so true. BTW, I am still waiting for your comment on the Vogon poem I dedicated to you, my friend!
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